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Old 06-24-03, 03:32 PM   #10
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**posting your lyrics is gay because this is audio not text**

Flyweight:
Flow-your flow was ok, but your stop and go was annoying
beat-the beat was dope, whats the name of it?
punches-I didn't see much punches much from u
personals-no personals from u
multies-your multies were OK
creativity-your creatvity was OK, but it wasn't eye catching
voice-your voice is straigh
delivery-your delivery was good for this beat
quality-quality is good, nothing was wrong with it
what i didn't like from u is that you talked more about your skills than you talked about your opponent, and you took canibus style

i'll wreck-this-bitch, u can't text-for-shit
^um homie this is ayo, im proud if he can't text
The beat was to tight
White Rabbit:
Flow-your flow was OFF!!!
beat-was tight..
punches-your punches were OK,
personals-no personals, i didn't see any
multies-your multies was OK
creatvity-not much creativity, just saying that you were going to crack his neck,leg,arm and shit
voice-your voice was iigh, i can tell your white
delivery-your delivery was off..
quality-your quality was not very good, your beat was to high,and i can hear buzz in the background. u need to learn about noise reduction

man i can tell that u haven't done many-text
^that made no sense^

vote-White Rabbit..HIs verse had punches, and original style. If i was to vote on flow i would give it to scan though..