feedback much appreciated the hook is uspposed 2 have a smapled feel which xplains its shortness


*Hook-The MRB*
we have no protection no contraception the whole worlds pregnant with problems and no1z an acception

*verse 1- The MRB
With myself im debating, tryna wage war against constant hating/
Deliberating on haunting thoughts, my mind should contain an 18 rating/
Yet muthafuckas on a different page, question my sickening rage/
When it comes to viewing my own visions im still two years underage/
Why the state? aren’t I the one surrounded with beautiful materials/
The one whos possessions extend more than free gifts in cereals/
Well, well im basking in my middle class home/
But becoz im privileged, don’t mean I can’t have a right to moan/
You can’t look in the photo albums, coz my problems aint jus visual/
There biblical, moral audio and trivial/
N Its so hard, when theres no1 with whom to share/
Lifes constant barriers, even though others are aware/
Communication? Aww yes ive witnessed a demonstration/
But my text on a moniter, ain’t really aural penetration/
I can watch and listen but myself I can not break/
N if I don’t find a formula soon, it will need to take/
Work from another section, to give me a confidence injection/
That way others will begin to know and understand my affection/
For them,then hopefully they’l make l more of and effort and be/
Able to figure out what im all about mentally/
And eventually ill find out for myself as well/
Maybe my thoughts and what came out of comes out of my mouth will gel/
Coz you see its easy to create a sudden twist of fate/
If u have support, but you see im still in wait/
Enemies and friends, should be completely separated from one another/
An evil one surely shouldn’t be considered a social brother/
But then its hard, you can’t just wave you wand and dispel/
Coz they once helped you stand up on the ground from which u fell/
Besides when others are in the equation, you’ve got a remainder/
Someone who doesn’t consider this, to be an invader/
So ill just stare, crossing my fingers tryna interact/
Tryna rediscover old chemistry thats jus seemed to collapse/
So ill put on a brave face, barely keeping myself in line/
But it jus feels, im tryna fight law and crime at the same time/


*Hook-The MRB*
we have no protection no contraception the whole worlds pregnant with problems and no1z an acception

*verse 2- Wooshy*

This Shit is What I find the hardest rap about/
I become hot n sweaty & fulstured & being to shout/
So ill spit it how i see it & you can draw you conlusions/
But for now sit & listen about my confusions/
What pisses me off the most that people spread lies/
Its asthough theres a group of them giving each other high 5s/
Thing is they dont come out with it it all by word of mouth/
All of the rumours are fake sticky & grimy like the south/
You think you with the prefect girl then she gives you clymidia/
Now all you can think about is how u shaged that girl named lydia/
All you people piss me of with can i have some get your own shit/
Cuz i buy this stuff to be a one bit hit but you make it a 2 bit hit/
I get less & you get more from me stop scroungin buy your own/
its this shit that i have to say i cant condone/
Your actions are survial actions, theses are the actions/
that i only know 2 well these actions form factions/
who needs eneimes when you have friends like these/
When you hear that kinda shit your heart is ice & freezes/
Whats wrong you ask ? the fact that no 1 is your friend no more/
some times i wish i could just walk out of lifes exit door/


*Hook-The MRB*
we have no protection no contraception the whole worlds pregnant with problems and no1z an acception//