i can't poll vote but i guess i should at least give feed back. both of you had fairly decent word use and punches. could have been better. but tik had better flow.
vote (though it has no significance): tik-tok

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early man walked away
as modern man took control
their minds weren't all the same
and to conquer was their goal
so he built his great empire
and he slaughtered his own kind
he died a confused man
killed himself in his own mind

we're only gonna die for our own arrogance
that's why we might as well take our time