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Old 06-25-03, 05:26 AM   #10
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hey fam i saw this and decided to peep it since u WL-IS

this shit was deep, had a desperatness to it that u captured nicely. started off mysterious but the understanding of events comes to the reader as he progresses throught to the end. nicely done as far as netting grief and anxiety. this was a good RB.com piece, my props to u girl


peep my poems aight, holla
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