Blah... the both of you need to ditch that style, quit with the italics, shorten your lines, and learn how to re-word the punches for maximum affect cause both your styles are really newbie-ish rght now and the flow was awful. .

I think H4iku's wordplay and punches were slightly better and thats what edged this battle for me, but both you need elevation.

Vote: H4iku