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Old 06-25-03, 02:00 PM   #9
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Originally posted by Mystik Mind
^^Yep...Structure Help Readers Want To Read It And Flow Was Off...Try 2 Make Each Line A Similar Amount Of Syllables...Helps Us 2 Read It And Get More Into It...

Also Like Xpoz'D Said...Get Off The Gangsta Shit...Mix It Up Abit...Complexity...Use Nice Punches And Original Shit...Laughs Aswell...Always Good...

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