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Old 06-25-03, 11:11 PM   #14
younggadget
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P.O.P. got this.Both was good but near the middle and the end of X's rap I got confused.It should have been something that should have been clarified.Some of the things that was said like the son reason that the mother died.I didnt get it.A little more effort should have been put into your verse.You should enter again and try again.
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