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IP:
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Were Were Best Of Friends, We Went Everywhere Together..
We Made Highschool Pacts, We Said We'll Be Friends Forever..
Playing Football Together, We Always Ended Up Fighting..
I Was Only Joking, You Knew That, But Yet The Fued Kept Lighting..
It Got Too Much, You Kept Pushing Me, "Fuck Off, You Aint My Friend"..
Little Did I Know They Were The Last Words I Would Say To My Friend..
You See, Later That Night, Some Cunt Thinking He Gangsta Pulls Out A Knife..
Who The Fuck Are You To Kill His Time...Who The Fuck Are You To Take His Life..
I Was Helpless To Do Anything...I Was Simply Too Far Away..
Ran Like The Wind To Help You...But Time Went As-Tray..
The Image That I See Of You Lying There Is Every Tomorrow's Yesterday..
But I'm Here Today Without You Beside Me To Guide Me The Right Way..
Every Night The Same Nightmare, A Re-Occuring Tragedy Of Your Death..
And Tha Foggot Who Did This Is No Where To Be Seen, My Friend Had His Last Breath..
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was the best part of either verses... after this mystiks stuff kind of fell off and wasnt up to par... but redloks whole verse was not up too par.. it ruins a topical when you start talkin about 'rolling joing' and shit... and when you use the word faggot it takes away from it also... use words like Coward.. makes it seem more understandable and less harsh..you get a better feel in the topical for it...
therefore Vote Mystik Mind
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