This is the verse for a rap i'm recording sometime this week -

I cant stand it man, i'm in some kinda place
where all i can feel is the swet on ma face
i'm all haisy, sweatin, regrettin' tired and lazy
i'm hearing Jay Z, this shit is crazy
like a nightmare that plays me, it's gonna phase me
I can’t breathe move or anything, it's de-brained me
must be in my subconscious an imagination
but can hear a crackly radio station
I need some kind of knowledge, some information
I see images of sliced wrists, in a basin
it doesn't make any sense, and it's dark all over
loosed my stability, poisoned from a cobra
i'm feeling the wind, and im gettin colder
this is some x-files shit, with no moulder
i'm freezing, wrinkled, and 50 years older
my shoulders feel a heavy weight, like a bolder
that has soiled me into the ground, made a little mound
i'm shouting, but you cant, hear any sound
i'm gettin dissy, the whole room's spinning around
like i'm a toy hound, in the bottom of lost and found
barking, whilst symatainstly gettin' wound
I hear people laughin', am i gettin clowned
you don’t know, i don’t know, does anybody know
I need some answers, but i'm not gonna get them though
i'm tryin to find a gap, in this dark aura
but everytime i move my body, muscles get sorer
I feel pressure pushing down, it won’t let up
and from all around, i hear voices shoultin "GET UP"
it's impossible to move, and i'm totally fed up
I hear a phone someone’s ringing my, uncle ted up
"hi, this is ted, who am i speaking to"
"shut the fuck up, one wrong move, and he is through"
"dahhhhhh" the phone hung up and they were gone
weird music started playin', like an encoded song
I couldn't understand a word, everything was wrong
poisoned smoke seeped in, it choked me for long
suddenly the devil appeared and said "toke bitch toke"
he wanted money, but i had nothing, i was broke
people started laughing at me, tryin to provoke
but suddenly it all stopped, and I woke


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