Jee-You Knit?
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Alright, for you R-Rated, I might just lower the amount of lines you can spit. Yours kept me uninterested, I felt it to be very jumpy, you know what I mean, kinda like you were changing subjects most of the time. But it was alright, I truly didn't think it was that great though, elevate. Score=6.9
LyricAli: When I first read yours, I felt...empty, like it really wasn't the ending I was hoping for. When you do stories like these, it's good to base them upon a true story, not have them be the exact same story because, then it isn't really you writing it, is it. The first half of yours was worthy of note, I didn't like the rest.
Score=7.4
Vote=LyricAli
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