ok here we go

Lyricali: One of the better opicals ive read so far...you had me wondering what was going to happen and awesome imagery
Score: 7.7

R-Rated: Your lines are far too long and i was't feeling the whole "fuck those bitch ass nigga" thing...topical arent supposed to be over sweared, at least in my opinion
Score: 6.3

Vote: Lyricali