hmmm..not bad at all...

some parts are hard to understand but as i read it to the end...its clear...the flow doesnt fit much but for some they do....
hmmm..vocabs need to be up a bit....the content is kinda confusing but the structure is alright...

this is just my contructive critism ya kno..dont take it personally...

we all still elevatin on this site...

so yeah...drop some more

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