I’m thinking of love the way its suppose to be //
A girl n me the bird n beez, its flows like poetry//
Inner beauties free, I aint got time 4 these hoes and skets//
With an Incest personality, to leave my emotions wet //
Feelings over swept, hair smells of a red roses cent//
I need a girl with intellect, and know how to show her best//
We cud roll like Romeo and Juliet; sooner yet//
But we know love is rare like a solar lunar eclipse//
It will be her and me in a relationship//
Love is a game of roulette so place your bets//
If u don’t a girl will walk by and leave u to face regret//
Its amazing stress; butterfly’s got my stomach upset//
Copping digitz from ladies mobile hand setz//
I’m anxious, dis gals got me in a nervous wreck//
But I do show my tense I’m just merged in sweat//
Dis knew luvs got my head heavy like flue bugz//
It true blud, when I saw dis gal it made my nerves hurt//
Watch as her eye are locking me up like murders and perverts//
I disburse verbs , dis gals gottta insane bumper //
And I hope to approach her an exchange numbers//
hit it off with wounders dat enrage thunder//
I’m only young but this the type of gal to have your second name under//

any thought on how i cud elevate this verse