real nice KEM....didnt kno u was on summin otha then rf, u shood post this up in the poetry section there u gon get lots of response, oh yea its mizery by the way.....


now for the critique of the piece.......it was amazaing, great topic good develpoment of it, the length was apporpriate and effective...the imagry was truly amazing and the expression was done beautifully....i really liked this

"a streak of green lead by his imagination of a midsummer walk-
the mantel holds a vase of dried out daisies,but he can smell them still-"

for some reason i reallly liked those lines, it just seemed to sum up the muse of an artist...anyways
great job
much luv
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