This piece is simple as it is...

although it has well used vocabs..it seemed a little bit weak on the imagery part...

but the very simplistic theme of the poem made the piece really nice to read...

"It inly needs to be what we desire because it's ours......yours and mine"

^^^ i really think the ending is my best part...like most poems i read...

nicely done!

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