Add-Libb: flow was deepa, wordplay: 6 for inconsistency, rhyme scheme: 7 for more consistency, story: 6 for hard to undastand but a good idea (tragic), total: 19

Ill-Mental: nyce storyline, wordplay: 7 for consistency and flow, rhyme scheme: 6 for simplicity, story: 9 for a well written verse which was self explanatory, total: 22

My vote goes to Ill-Mental, consistency helped him win this battle, stay real, peace, 1

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