smooth criminals like lil bow wow or sommit....any hoo this was nice...your last lines seems like this...

if you had a week to live id wanna die after being sixer
so I could never go a day without her I love her I miss her...

okay maybe not but you deserve somethin like that..like me....
maybe not..but love dont cost a thing...all my life is all I..eehh

okay..a book of synonums does a lot for any patron to exemplify a
wonderful display of lyrics and you did your thing on this here.

you flipped your thoughts well through the whole thing and that had my attention throughout this.

never ussed trepidation before in a sentence or heard it but its probaly allong the lines of turmiol or travesty....not because of the t factor but they come to mind with the word...this was nice reply back