Youndgagdet: wordplay: 6 for inconsistency and simplicity, rhyme scheme: 7 for double rhymin and inconsitency, story's: 5 for 3 short ones which could have been elaborated on, total: 18

T-square: wordplay: 7 for aight flow and simplicity, rhyme scheme: 6 for simplicity, story: 7 for a good twist at tha end and a more colorful story, total: 20

My vote goes to T-square, stay real, peace, 1

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