A2Z: wordplay: 8 for flow and consistency, rhyme scheme: 7 for stability, story: 8 for originality and hottness, total: 23

Simile: wordplay: 7 for consistency, rhyme scheme: 7 for consistency, story: 7 for hottness, total: 21

A2Z gets my vote, but Simile also had a good verse.....i dont think ya bit his verse

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