Mad Man's verse was good, no doubt. But it didn't make a strong impression on me. I won't call it contrived, but I could see what was coming. And that is not to say fgee's was a shocker, but some of the writing, and especially the scene-setting was pretty impressive. And I don't want to give points away just for the length, but there was a sense of work in fgee's verse that superceded Mad Man's here. Still a close battle, and truth be told I am predisposed to like Mad Man's interpretation of the topic more. But fgee's verse wins.

Vote = fgee