Mad Man
Had a consistent flow throughout the piece. . Could have been a bit more creative with the topic at hand, but it still hit hard. Was a much more polished piece and structured better.

Fgee
I'm surprised. . Absolutely surprised at the caliber you wrote at. Unfortunately, it seems (to me) as if you had all the ideas you wanted to write about in your head, but kind of threw them all together without much arrangement. Regardless of that, it was a great piece, but I don't believe it was good enough to beat Mad Man's. Flipped the topic amazingly well, and showed real competition.

The Verdict : Mad Man

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