that was really good.....the flow was great ...vocabs were well used.
hmmm...the repetition of "Reflections" really added the creativeness and strong content of the piece...i wrote a reflection poem once and i did the whole repetition thing to but the only difference is...the setting was that i was lookin at myself at the mirror then i took it from there...
"Now Im changing my life,forgetting my past,hopefully this relationship with god will last...
Still expressing my feelings through rhymes and poetry,im out of the darkness,the world is bright,i can see...
Given up my life of crime,this aint no lie,finally i made a mark before i had to die..."
for some reason i liked this part...hmm maybe because its like the whole climax of the poem...i felt it when i read it
some good ish right there...this is i think the best one i read so far from you....
keep droppin!