wow....the wordplay was amazing....i was like 'damn'..


i mean like every line had its own meaning and content..but u still made it appoint that it rhymes one way or another but this is more like a keystyle type ish...like u just type whats on ur mind and it goes from one thought to another....pretty interesting..more of like an open mic but can be a poetry too...

"Fate's Sick Sense Of Humor...20 Years Of Waste...The Son Of A Boy...
Wilts In The Hands Of A Gun...Only Birth Given Is Death..."

^^there's something interesting about these lines that amazed me...'only birth given is death' <---- impressive thoughts

"The Free Of Might...Right...Sips The Passion Fruit...Given By The Tree Of Life...
The Ability To Write...On Clouds...And Staple Them...3...To The Sky..."

....and of course the ending is definitely brilliant...i loved it


tight....and once again very good...

drop more!

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