alright....i was gonna do my whole breakdown constructive critism thing...but the fact that i aint know where to cut between the lines...it made it hard for it to break it bar by bar that u actually didnt do....

well...lemme see..this is like a long sentence thought out...sure it was interesting...its like when u read it...u have to hold ur breath for awhile...i dont know maybe its just me and how i read it...*shrugs*

the content is somewhat semi typical...but how u structured it made ur piece really stood out there...

and yeah flowz...im looking for ur views on the next picture we gonna put up..i read urs and its really amazing...

mad props to this simple piece...drop more!

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