you want feedback nigga, here it is............

the multies combined to run back and forth with your punchlines
i.e mult, punchline, multi were good and ckept my attention to read.

vocab-8.5
flow-9
punchlines-9
multies-7.5
overall-8.5

score-8.75=tight shit,

now check out my newest shit and give some real feedback too nigga..............