Pretty good. Parts of it were confusing with all those I's and Them's though, hehe. Towards the ending I got kinda lost with what was happening. I dunno, I'm a dumbass so maybe that's why. But I liked reading it. How you analyzed what was going on was cool.
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Originally posted by BabyGurl68
Last resort or first priority?
Am I the most important?
or am I just there incase
It’s not that I want war with them
they are just taking you away from I
and I am not sure wether I or Them come first
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My favorite part out of the whole thing. You made it plain and simple what the writing was about in those lines. Post more stuff up..