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Sleepers, zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
dam some feedback plz
This is from Vortex.
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Ahhhhhh, great piece my man, very indepth, i loved the imagery and emotion you got out in this, nice story too, you really went to town with the descriptive qualities great content throughout this piece, started off strong and finished on a high too, there was a couple lines id like to quote but these were my favourite:
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Lost my bearing and the history of certain things.
This dragon lost its wings
When it seperated from its family.
Capturing the picture graph of nature,
Stabbing leaves of poison ivy drops
Secrets locked, perhaps philosophy knocks
It's gotta be the prophecy I think
But it's not...
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^ Nicely worded, great portrayal of an original topic and the finish was just worded dope, keep it up 'Libz!
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