This was average, It would prolly strike a chord with the females with the sensitivity and the subject of relationships, but it's a bunch of niggas on here so don't excepct alot of positive feedback. As far as skill wise you got the raw talent, hopfully you pick up on some of the fundmentals and make yourself a better emcee, you know being more slick with your wordplay, more creative with what you want to say, not rhyming just one word a line, shit like that.
Keep at it, Dirty

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