damn this was hot Addlibb...this touched deep.
It's really hard to voice what it was about, I didn't really catch it, but it was still dope.
I liked how you swapped son and sun, and the whole rap like-poemlike-rap like thing.....

best lines:
The Devil's prolific weapon is manhood
To test the fortress of faith with openness
Before it's understood and focused in.
My heart has died to be broken in.

damn.
hott piece dude
Peace

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