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Old 06-28-03, 04:54 PM   #4
VersaStyles
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lacks emotion/style/mic presence delivery needs wrk flow just went through da beat didn't really ride or flow off beat it was jus kinda there n got by

voice is monotone lyrics is coo but u jus need to wrk on sum aspects of ya rappin short track too but n e ways stay up n keep droppin
try n be concious of how u sound while ur recording u gotta put effort into gettin style/mic presence n emotion when u rap


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