lacks emotion/style/mic presence delivery needs wrk flow just went through da beat didn't really ride or flow off beat it was jus kinda there n got by
voice is monotone lyrics is coo but u jus need to wrk on sum aspects of ya rappin short track too but n e ways stay up n keep droppin
try n be concious of how u sound while ur recording u gotta put effort into gettin style/mic presence n emotion when u rap
Peep my trax appreciate it*
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