I was really not feeling this.
If you're gonna post a battle verse, why not just battle Bash?
it seems stupid to make people read crap that has nothing to it.
There wasn't any good wordplay to speak of, and your punches were really weak.
He obviously isn't gangsta if he does internet text rap. That isn't an insult.
Try to write a verse with more behind it, maybe add some metaphors and multies, and you'll be in buisness.
Peace

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