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Old 06-29-03, 04:25 AM   #12
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Camarac:


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your girl and talk got something in common: Their both cheap
D’s Behind my Bars, & only thing Breaking Out is his Acne.


2 Pretty Good Opener.

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actually, i dont need a Nintendo to change Cartridges, geek
cause yo - that brown line in your briefs. . isnt a win Streak!


2 Not bad line..

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you've been beat, i'll make a necklace outta ya heart of Gold
then you'll get Thrown thru the Air for claiming ya the Heir to my Throne.


2 eh, wordplay was nicely put... not bad.

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Kid aint grown, I can sum how many girls you've fucked:
you thought a Camels Toe was on the end of its foot!


HaHa, 2.5 Had me laugh ..

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now ya stuck, cuz but im iller than you, quit crying and pleeding
beating you? im good at Arcades, - only a Quarter efforts needed!


3.5 Nice...Liked It.

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ur hairs receeding, been doin this text shit too long, but screw ya,
i'll fuck you up in so many ways, End'll rename me Karma Sutra!


3 I Liked That Line A Lot.. Dont Ask Why.

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You came nice against phrantik, and hey - i wont front
i look at you in a new light. . but ur still one ugly cunt!


2 it wasnt bad..

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this dumb fuck needs to quit rap, or catch a hard backhand
cuz his fat ass Swallows Balls then Gets Ghost, like Pac Man!


4 Ha Ha Had To Be One Of The Best Lines Of this Battle!

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fuck gats and, knives, Cams taking lives without a gun,
i'll bitchslap you with ur girl, and hit two pussies at once!


2.5 It Was Pretty Good..

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this wussy's done, how you gon' act ganksta? ya dead soft
so try taking me Head On. . and i'll take ya fucking Head Off!


Not A Bad Closer... Give It A 2


CAMARAC POINT RATING:23.5

13th Deciple:

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U Bout To Be Removed Of Ur Flesh Watch As I Burn This Faggot
To Death/Police Find My English Book As Evidence.....Realized U
Got Killed Wit My Text/


1.5 Wasn't A good way to open it really, kind of played also.

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Lyrics Cause U To Bleed......Cut Off Ur
Whole Existance Wit Ease/Ur Shit Couldn't Be Dope......If Ur Diet
Only Consisted Of Weed/


1 VERY Played, Very.. Takes Off Mad Points..

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Unloadin Verbal Lead At This Kid.......Yes
Disciple Reppin The South/Label U As Mr. Bucket.......Cuz U Stay
Havin Ballz In Ur Mouth/


1 Didn't make a lot of sense, sorry wasn't feeling it.

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Leave U Seekin A Gun.......Watchin Me
Unleash Numerous Shots/Force U To Call Me Maxwell House....Cuz
I'm Good To The Last Drop/


2.5 One of your best lines..

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Halfway Thru This Battle And I'm
Already Leavin U Sonned/Bite Ur Tongue.......Cuz If I Wanted Ur
Two Cents I Would've Stolen Ur Income


Would have been nice, if wasn't played 2

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How Can I Learn And
Elevate?.....When This Battles Not Even A Test/Cuz The Only Time
U Pushin Weight Is When Ur Rearrangin Ur Bench Press


Another played line man, work on that..
1.5

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Expressin
My Sincerities Cuz I'm Leavin U Dearly Departed Kid/Deposit My
Fist In Ur Chest And Withdraw My Hand Wit Ur Heart In It


not bad.. would of been better in an audio but not text.

2

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U
Already Sweatin And Shakin.........Hidin Behind Ur Curtains And
Blinds/Camarac Couldn't Be Flippin The Script If This Actor Was
Rehearsin His Lines!!!


2 eh wasnt bad

13TH DECIPLES POINT SCORE: 14.5

voteCAMARAC

Camarac - Overall nice verse, your punch lines over came his, flow stayed steady, some real creative lines.. pretty good verse.

13th Deciple - Eh, your verse wasnt bad, could be A LOT!! Better, punches were pretty played, lacked creativity, flow was pretty good.. but you lost this man..


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