o.k, The "verse" coulda been cut into 2 verses which woulda made this go alot better. The First part of the verse:
Crews against crews but we still only on the net,
ya'll hating me when we still have'nt made it out the burbs and projects yet.
Be cool money ya still working at McDonald's and on your demo,
but got the nerve to talk to me like you dropped 5 hits and got a dropped benzo.
Wishing you were in the club with big name record execs. to build and mingle,
criticizing my picture like you made 3 albums and about to make ya next single,
like you've been in the game for a minute prince status and you already trying to elevate to a symbol.
You cats kill me on here with the replies ya drop,
I guess the trend now is to hate to rise to the top,
the more ya'll study BET and MTV the more ya'll write the lies ya watch.
Bottom man say word^ to the man above so I'm gonna keep writing and serve the man above,
one day the lyrical pictures I paint will demand ya hugs some words just deserve the love.
Used to write in caps so I calmed it down when everybody told me to stop,
the way this culture push you away sometimes it makes me wanna run the alternative route and jump into pop.
- Was hott, it flowed well, had meaning, good wordplay too...

But from then on it kinda lost me a bit....Felt a bit like you were feeding off "Only God Can Judge me", but anyway...

OVERALL:6/10