hmm...alright...this not bad at all...more like a freestyle to me...

i noticed that the line breaks didnt really fit the flow...maybe some lines were long and others were short

but..the content is pretty simple and interesting...

ur emotions are pretty well expressed...

not really tooo much to it...but nice drop tho!

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