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Old 06-30-03, 01:04 AM   #2
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damn, ish was str8. Good vocab, nice use of words as far as placement(it gave it an ere of mystery) overall very good poem. keep up this stuff


Peep some of my shit(prolly on the 2nd page of this forum since it hasnt been upp'd)
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