I dont feel like breaking someone down today...so ima do it like this:

the intro..couldnt here a word you said, was you rappin? wait why is this intro going so long...........this isnt an intro.....this is the song...

im sorry i cant be nice with this....this is real bad......you sound like your QUESTIONING yourself when u 'rap' / 'talk' hard to explkain..but the way you annunciate and emphasize your words it sounds like you are not sure of yourself...

i dunno

this is bad.

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