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Old 06-30-03, 03:54 AM   #1
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Angry Newbies Click Here--this Is A Multi

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Hey a little schoolin' on you...rhyming at the end of every line is not a multi...this is a multi:

LIFE IS A TEST, AND I GOT STRESS. I THINK OF SUCIDE AND DEATH, BUT ONLY IN JEST. I LOVE EVERY BREATH. BUT IT'S A MESS IF I'M THE ONLY ONE LEFT, AND I BET I GOT THE BLESS TO KEEP ME UNDER ARREST.

STRAIGHT
RHYMING WORDS:
1. TEST, JEST, ARREST
2. STRESS, MESS, BLESS
3. DEATH, BREATH

NEAR RHYMING WORDS: ALL OF THE ABOVE + LEFT AND BET

ALL AND ALL 10 PUNCHES/2 BARS: THAT IS A MULTI
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