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Old 06-30-03, 06:33 AM   #2
Manic Killer
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well if u aint gunna check in im postin now so u know i dont pre-write. fukn spit soon.
aight....

heartburn thats the only way anyone 'feels' acid//
too much masturbation has left ur dick permanently flaccid// (flaccid is the opposite of erect)
ur spits about as ill as if ud swallowed disinfectant//
nearly had a clean record, but now ive gone and wrecked it//
i seen ur one battle u spit like 15 lines without one punch//
but with a name like 'Acid Rhymes' i shouldnt expect much//
if ur verse was a package it'd be 90% filler polystyrene//
rap like a child, "moms got vanilla flavour ice-cream"//
couldnt punch in the 'mike' if u had lessons from 'tyson//
with no timing, rhyming, flow u suck harder than 'dyson// (dyson = vaccum cleaner brand)
you bitch newbies got ego's larger than verses//
cant spit a decent verse so u fill it full of curses//
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look here - for a newbie i'll put it simply worded//
like diseased live stock, ur best left un-herded (un-heard-ed)//