Ra Ill.
Krupp Needs To Ban You From RnR.
And Brandon Needs To Ban You From
Here. You Have More 1 Lines Open Mic
Replies Than Anyone.....

Understatement nice story. flow and internals
were nice, made it a decent read, i was a little
bit dissapointed by the ending. i thought you
would add a twist, about the person you are
now, finding the jacket. i don't know, your mom
dying came out of nowhere to me. i didn't like
that. but the skills in your storytelling were most
def. noticed. you have the talent, i usually think
of my endings before hand, to make them very
powerful. well i don't know, keep doing your thing
nice piece..

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