Shiznit's Thoughts:
are you kidding bout this piece???...or not.
alright ...here's the thing..it aint nothing wrong with trying ya know..its just sometimes TRY has its own limitations as well...but u gotta somehow figure out if this would be good enough..(here goes my contructive critism
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and yeah i know that this piece was something u called "BLUNT-HUNTT"<---sure does sounds interesting but u said blunt too much...*sigh*
some are really confusing..it doesnt mean that im confused i dont know what ur talking about..its just that how you execute some words...just a bit confusion..i mean u jumped from one idea to another....
"Crazy E did you find some weed ?
Yea , I found it .... Now beat it !!!" <---whats up with this...not that stylish
if you put like more vocabs ..and do something with the flow even if it aint have that much metas and wordplays it would be better
but anyways..dont take my comment the wrong way ya know...just helpin and sayin some shit out
lik i always say:
WE still elevatin..u should join us!