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		hi jen 
this was dope. 
your huge vocabulary astounds me. I am awed. 
The emotion in this surpasses most pieces. 
The most emotional shit I've seen people write seems cold and removed compared to this. I really felt it. 
the closing line was amazing. 
Peace 
		
	
		
		
		
		
			
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