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Old 07-01-03, 02:08 AM   #30
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Breakdown...

Brooklyn:

I could of sworn Marciano's were cherries, when i called him out I was expected to wreck a peck of fresh picked berries/...That was lame Brook...LMAO...sorry yo...but you could have flipped that 100% better...

you soft like pickin teddies, typin in capitols(capitals) wont make your rhyme stand out like people named Tina in BUENOS AIRES/...This was alright...wordplay was there, but could have been flipped better...

I'll grab ya mouth then grin, as I connect my air-force to ya chin/...decent punch...

scrape your sores with pens, then spray anthrax through your pores and skin/...Nice...graphic...

look, herb, my nerves deserves some type a relief when i speak/
lets be brief..you still couldn't rip me even if John Q provided you with ‘beats’/...dope set up...nice punch and wordplay also...

look kid, its ok to get ripped, just take it as a com-pli-ment/
knock out your sockets with a roll of quarters at ya dome, until I realized I started knockin cents/...LMAO...that was pretty coo...

Overall, this was a decent verse...I seen you come way iller than this Brook...you been sleeping lately or something...but you had some decent set ups and a couple of punches connected...

Overall: 6/10

Marciano:

My lines enter ur respiratory, making it hard for u to breath. -Instantly causing u to shake involuntarily like Parkinson’s disease//
Fuck head on collisions, I’ll attack u in ur dreams and violently shove a microphone in ur throat, just to amplify ur screams//...Dope ass opener and the flow and wordplay was felt...

I’d put gas in your mouth and light it and you still couldn’t spit-heat//
Slash your vocal chords and play instrumentals so you can say you rip-beats//...LMAO...this was nice...

Commin through with a slew, of murder-related material, puttin anthrax, in your bowls of Lucky Charms cereal //...That was lame yo...LMAO...Lucky Charms...LMAO...too thought out...could have been flipped totally better than what it was...

You’re always sucking on silicone titties, so you cant help but spit fake-lyrics. You say that your raising hell, but if you were an Exorcist ya couldn’t wake-spirits//...The first place was alright...but you made up for it on the second part...

Your lyrics couldn’t raise eyebrows, if you used liposuction to suck-your-forehead//
i hope u've learned next time u will run amuck and hide under your bed, since my drop all you´ll do is duck-behind-threads//...No...lol...really...closer was lame...could have left that out or thought of something better...

Overall, same as Brook, decent verse...I've never seen any of your material, so I wouldn't know how you usual come, but everyone needs room for elevation...but your flow was on point for the most part, but you had some coo punches...what really stood out was your opener...you two have a similar style or was that just for this battle in particular?

Overall: 5.5/10

Vote: Brooklyn