Shiznit's Thoughts:

Vocabulary...hmmm...not that much in here but some words were really deep that made it stood out with couple of really good words here and there

i. e.
"disregarding how I feel and discarding me and therefore seeing deeper into a selfless abyss"


FLOW....this keystyle was very nice to read...like even out loud..like its me that who are actually saying those words...it was just smooth not really on the run but it was good...

WORDPLAY...the piece much more elaborated by some simplistic words that really caught my attention

CONTENT....really interesting...reminded me of someone i know...someone that didnt do anything and now regret the fact that he shouldve took the step instead of avoiding it then stepping backwards instead...if that makes sense

the whole piece was really interesting and cuz it was a true to life shit it really amused me

just one thing : DONT BE A PUSSY or else u might just let 'the right' one pass...its better to try not that try at all

i liked it very much pat!

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