..A New Breed of Femcee..
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IP:
This battle was mad close in my eyes..
Chyna, your shit was tight, you had a few bars I wasnt really feelin
like>
>how you gonna compare me to another emcee, when you cant see me, trying to see me is like tryng to see invincibilty/
and a couple other lines that seemed kinda played to me..But you had a lot of tight shit too, Like..
From a different retrospect, you still couldn't dissect,My 'built' words that are erected by multiple 'architects'/
My 'vocabulary's' so good, even' Shakespeare' couldn't object me from using references to his text/
You just won't listen, I keep tryin to insist,That you need a 'dictionary' just to know when you getting dissed/
^All tight. Only other thing I could say is the rhyming seemed forced in some spots, but that doesnt really matter too much...
TaKtiK, you came mad creative with your shit, Only had ONE line I wasnt feelin
>Your rhymes too "edible", eat'em like a fat kid buttin' through his "lunch~line"::::: your so sorry, you got a "cheesy bachelor" as "ghostwriter" to write your "punch~lines"//
but the rest were on point like
Your rhymes bogus, I've seen better "wraps"(raps) on Candy "bars"::::: Mis-judgment leaves battle~scars, "fore~seen~accident" like drivin in NY wit British Cars// (You ran right into it.....)
and i like the comments in parenthesis, adds to what youre goin after in the punchline..
All in all, although Chyna came hard, Taktik, it seemed like you had more complex punches and just fresher shit all together.
So ima vote for TakTik. nice battle.
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