I Thought This Was Actually Pretty Dope For A Newb...

Although Your Trying To Be Too Gangsta, But The Meaning And Visualisation Was Pretty Good....

ive got to keep my head up on these streets,
all it takes is one blink for niggaz to think your weak,
gotta make sure everything comming out your mouth is deep,- This Was The Best BIt, Had Good Concept..Try To Use Some Multis To Smooth Out The FLow!

Keep Elevatin!