IP:
I remember a piece you did a while back...and that was quite brilliant..
..and this one shows (along with that one) that you've got a poetic pen for sure...really got a way with cleverly bringing words together...painting pictures with such vivid (yet also at times cryptic...deep at the least) imagery...
...but answer me this. Was the 'love' at the end meant to be part of the piece? Cos i can see how it'd fit in there. But also how it wouldn't...if you catch my drift..
...resp...
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