Shiznit's Thoughts:

Vocabulary...plain words were used to empower simplicity over typicality. More use of deeper words would attract the reader to like read more and shit.....

Flow...average and smooth...nothing really special...it fitted the whole verse...just some slid distinct drop error..but that aint really affect the whole verse.

WORDPLAY...metas and multies were hardly use...it just i think for the fact thats its written to how style u want it to be..props!

CONTENT...the whole true to life emotions and on how u relate and state ur inner feelings that made you write this kind of verse...its ordinary but on how u wrote it..that just made all those words that u used worth being part of the whole thing

OVERALL...simple piece that indicates a lot of emotions...i liked it


I SAID:

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