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Old 07-02-03, 09:39 AM   #2
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You Know Who:.... not feelin' tha beat.. not feelin' your flow at all, your too quiet or you slur, either way it sounded like crap..

on to the next...

Sick Mutha-Fucka:... needs more emotion, lyrics are kinda elementary, no real word play or meta's... I like tha beat.. hook was wack.. sorry yo, this one's not to good either, you need to seriously work on your emphasys..

next....

My Fantasy:.... mmmmmm, I want some blunt.. this one's a little better, lyrically it still needs wordplay and shit, but it flows better and your emotion's better.. this beat's safe.. ne-way.. that's all I'm-a listen to .. peace..
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