vote:goosen
punches punches punches, also a nice flow

XL4REAL: please take this advice, im not trying to be a smartass just listen!
u need more punches, try make sure in nearly every line ur dissing ur opponent. it will win u battles. also it will stop u going off course. battle some ppl a little less experienced... jus get ur confidence up a bit. you got good skills just maybe TRY my advice if it dont work call me an idiot.

i aint trying to be a know it all but trust me it will help and i would have liked someone to tell me about 10 battles ago