listening to sick mother fucker..

hook is weak.. flow is off so bad..mostly off beat.. voice could be better if ya felt it out more.. it was koo in the intro.. just really put feeling into it.. feel ur lyrics.. move your body to your words and always try to bring it across in the voice... did better in second verse..

but work on flow..

quality aint too bad..

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